Schreinfeld's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Psychic Club]

Rude language, but really funny. I like original humour.

[Yasuo Tales: Prologue]

Really good submission. What stood out was the great music, not any flaws or errors. Some things to improve: make sure the drawings look ok. If you look at 0:06, where he is kneeling, you can see a black line extending from his wing, not part of his body. Also work on the number of drawn cells, I'd say make the fighting longer and more involved, this is what really shines, is the fluid motion of the characters. Overall this 'toon worked well for me as entertainment. I might reccommend this to my friends if was hooked into the characters development.

Shho responds:

Thanks! I actually worked pretty long on the music. Somehow I never noticed the line on 0:06 haha. Thanks, Really great crit!

[NWAR: Loose Canon]

Very well polished, I thought the script was brilliant and original. This quality of material could be aired in front of an international audience, like in a film festival.

If you made something of equal quality, but more of a drama or something people take seriously, then your audience will take you more seriously. I say this because a comedy short is what is abundant at Newgrounds, although you do stand out. What I'd like to see is a more sophisticated comedy style, less cliched jokes, and more story development, maybe think first who the characters are and how they develop.

What I see here is the seed of a professional, doing professional level work. Lots of things could be changed about this, but overall it's very very good, mainly because of the quality: great sound and graphics, but the story is too close to dexter or another film noir. So the lesson here is to start with something original, make original jokes, don't be afraid to get out onto that branch. Don't emulate the competition, just be the competition. Overall the film felt immature, because of the groaner jokes, it could have deviated from the archetype of noir films a little more. Again, awesome work! Love it!

[Happy Plane]

I laughed over and over again.

[BLISS]

Wonderful and trippy. A real ride. I thought the animation was superb.

[Chuck Murdock #001]

Well written jokes!! YAY!

Best line; "Can I fuck your armpit?"
Good job.

[the YuYu]

Absolutely superb.

I can't compliment you enough on the detail and unique style of your animation. I have to say that when I watched the YuYu, I was smiling the whole time. Also, I felt the music was a perfect compliment to the action on screen. VERY well done.

[Weed Harmless 3]

Awesome!

This shit is fucking hilarious!

[Billy's Big Day]

You need a new writer.

The jokes were so lame, I am suing you for the 5 minutes of my life that I just wasted. That aside, you ripped off using Anime style facial expressions for your characters, which is totally unoriginal, and not funny. A car exploding, from a fortune coming true? A sacrastic cat? Spare me the cliches next time. The only remotely amusing part of this cartoon was when Tom Fulp said "I gotta stop smoking this stuff", as a bag of generic green substance sits on the couch. (OOOH SPOILER!!1)

[-Go Away-]

What a hoot.

I like the song, I like the funny depictions of the various 'unwanted' celebrities. I would have liked to hear more insults directed at Donald Trumps' hairdo.