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[Yasuo Tales: Prologue]

Really good submission. What stood out was the great music, not any flaws or errors. Some things to improve: make sure the drawings look ok. If you look at 0:06, where he is kneeling, you can see a black line extending from his wing, not part of his body. Also work on the number of drawn cells, I'd say make the fighting longer and more involved, this is what really shines, is the fluid motion of the characters. Overall this 'toon worked well for me as entertainment. I might reccommend this to my friends if was hooked into the characters development.

Shho responds:

Thanks! I actually worked pretty long on the music. Somehow I never noticed the line on 0:06 haha. Thanks, Really great crit!